Tuesday, June 29, 2010

Part I of an unLong explanation.

Here are reasons for why this book is ending and
you litteraly don't have to give about it

Reasons.
  • ran out of good ideas
  • told people too much
  • too many ideas all at once.
  • too lazy..
  • not enough time
  • thought this  story was uber lame.
and apologies to the ppl that actually liked this story.

Sunday, June 27, 2010

ending spoilers.

Since this is ending. I thought I'd post spoilers for future chapters. This whole story is ending, so if you can piece together the different messages, it would have been an amazing book. 

(The last and final chapter will not contain the below topics)

umm. well chapter 3, it sshould be how jessie and semma break up.. u noe what would be kewl.. if someone was controlling jessie 2 kiss rose?

like sebastian?!
3:58pmIzabela

yea!! so tht semma will be all his!!

so like jessia catches up with semma nd tells her he didnt mean it

nd tht he loves semma

but semma runs away to sebastian

nd she seees himm like controlling jessie
3:59pmMe

yea.. and rose was just a pawn.. so when rose discovers what sebastian did, she slaps him hard.. and then sebastian goes into a deep depression
3:59pmIzabela

naaa

rose should know about it
3:59pmMe

but, i still want rose to slap sebastian for some reason.
3:59pmIzabela

cus rose wants to b with jessie more then sebastian

yeaa
4:00pmMe

and rose acts really stupid, and then semma falls for rose's act.
4:00pmIzabela

shell slap him for waiting so long to do this

yup
4:00pmMe

yay :):) we have my slap!
4:00pmIzabela

but jessie convinces semma tht rose is bad

lol ya thers a lot of slapping
4:01pmMe

and then semma believes jessi (and their in the woods) and rose hears them, and she sends the big ass creaature to kill them,but jessie's powers are down because the creature is the wizard's weakness

yay.. slapps!!
4:02pmIzabela

yea but the creature happens in chapter 4
4:02pmMe

kk.. was about chap 3

lets just get a summery 4 dat
4:03pmIzabela


June 6 at 4:14pm
jessie is interlocked in a kiss w/ rose, when the 'spell' suddenly ends. he turns to semma and sees her tears. he runs towards her and says that he only loves her, not rose. he had no idea what was going on (even though he thought it was sebastian, but it was really rose?) Semma slaps him again!! (3 cheers for the 1st slap). Then rose walked over and slaps jessie for just saying that 2 semma. (2nd slap :D).

semma runs to sebastian.. he takes her in, smiling.. they are locked in a tight embrace.. (no deets ) Semma's a bit stiff, because it just didn't feel right for her.

I wanna make semma have another friend, w/o magical powers..
( or a vampie).. So semma's other friend is controlled by sebastian, so since semma tells her other bff everything (EVERYTHING), sebastian hears all of it..



June 6 at 5:13pm
ideas.

oh anthony recommended this: kk

how bout semma ignores jessie?

and tht will make him start to kill
4:56pmIzabela

oo

thts good

wat anthony?
4:57pmMe

e.
4:57pmIzabela

okk
4:57pmMe

elescano..
4:57pmIzabela

okk
4:58pmMe

melody or summer???

summer right?
4:58pmIzabela

idk
4:58pmMe

it has that rose relationship, and it seems mooore
4:59pmIzabela

i like summer wat about u
4:59pmMe

well betta i guess.

i sed summer
4:59pmIzabela

o okk

then summer
4:59pmMe

yay.. new character.
4:59pmIzabela

lol kk
4:59pmMe

is she a vampire?
4:59pmIzabela

but my mom dnt want me writing inapropriate thingss
4:59pmMe

k.. so little romance?

more horror?
4:59pmIzabela

naa

shes normal

but there cud be romance

just not like making out
5:00pmMe

kk.. so then she can be minipulatedy sebastian.
5:00pmIzabela

like ther cud me huggin
5:00pmMe

ohh.. okay.

but like quick mentions of hugs and kisses w/o bing intense
5:00pmIzabela

yeaa
5:01pmMe

ok.. dats ez
5:01pmIzabela

killing part cud be like chapter 5
5:01pmMe

killing part w. jessie? semma's parents?? semma?
5:01pmIzabela

like semma ignores jessie cuz summer is manipulated by sebastian nd tells semma bad things bout him
5:02pmMe

:):) and jessie has anger manage ment issues and he almost kills summer?
5:02pmIzabela

na he almost kills rose
5:02pmMe

hes magical, so her was about to release the spell, when semma or sebastian sees him
5:02pmIzabela

so rose gets mad nd sends tht monsterr

yupp
5:04pmMe

but jessie doesn't know about roses's powers, so while (sebastian is stronger so sebastian is creating a shield for rose from behind a tree cuz he sees jessie, so then rose secretly summons a monster?
5:04pmIzabela

rose summons a monster lata wen semma nd jessie are hangin
5:04pmMe

and semma walks into the woods, wanting to talk 2 jessie, when she sees the monster? rose and sebastian leave while jessie goes help semma/?
5:05pmIzabela

yup

but tht is after jessies anger problem 
next chapter shud be how then jessie kisses rose again nd then semma slaps rose. then jessie kisses semma after semma slaps rose.
wen jessie kisses semma, semma slaps him again and runs away. and jessie runs after her 

Long Explanation Coming

We're so sorry, but this story will be coming to an end. Don't worry, a final chapter will be written. Sorry for the cancelation on short notice...


~ Kelly

Friday, June 11, 2010

Update

So I got bored...

I'm thinking about changing the blog layout. Or is the original one better?

You know, the more people that read and comment, the faster Izabela and I update this book.

Chapter 3 has barely started due to school stuff.

I made a twitter to post random updates about  the book (I'm that bored)

And remember to NOT ONLY READ BUT COMMENT!!!

~  Izabela and Kelly (Me)

Saturday, June 5, 2010

Notice

Note if you scroll all the way to the bottom, there is a playlist. At the end of each chapter, a certain 'song soundtrack' will be posted. All you have to do is find the number or the song on the playlist (at the bottom) to listen to it while reading.

And if there's any 'romantic scene', it won't be as in depth as this. It'll be very concise, and just stating the fact, not looking too deep into it. So the main component of this now is the mystery that's planned for further chapters.

PS: Read and Comment.

PPS: The Book's Theme song is Hate That I Love You by Rihanna featuring Ne-Yo

~ Kelly & Izabela

Chapter 2: Big Choices and Bigger Mistakes



Dedicated to the Amazing People Who Read Chapter 1

  • Julian
  • Albana
  • Sara
  • Lesly
  • Kimberly V.
  • Audrey
  • Maggie
  • and ect. Were's sorry if we forgot your name. But your still awesome :)
The air was tense. The inside was quaint, with a few electronics. A TV was on as was a computer. There was something on a small table that looked somewhat like an iPad. I couldn't see a phone anywhere. The furniture was laid neatly. There was a door and a few walls covering space that seemed to be the bathroom. There were these doors which lead to two separate bedrooms.. The cave wasn't as big as its prodigious size on the exterior. The young woman still cooking caught me looking around. "It may seem small, but its a beauty" she remarked about the cave. I nodded, not wanting to be rude. I checked my phone, it said 12:30PM. I still had 1 hour and 30 minutes. There weren't clocks anywhere. Only this sand timer that was dropping tiny emeralds every minute, in the back of the room. Jessie stared at me, probably thinking I didn't know. I caught his eye and he quickly occupied himself with the bowl of berries on the counter in front of him. I smiled secretly. I think he caught me smiling because he then said to me "You have such a cute smile. There's no reason to hide it". I started to blush and his mom started to smile. I turned to him and he took my hand, and we started to walk to what looked like his room. "OH MY GOD! WHAT IN THE WORLD IS THIS?!" I stared in complete shock at the absurd scene. There was a  big, brown furry bear laying on the floor. Jessie smiled and said to the bear "Bobo get up. Semma's not used to you yet." I smiled at the though of it. The bear left to the kitchen and I sat on the bed. Jessies room smelled of dust, bear, and flowers. It was weirdly pleasant. The walls had been painted red and his bed could fit three people.

Jessie came over to me and kissed my cheek. I tensed. His lips were soft, warm, and felt so pleasant. After he kissed my cheek he went for my lips. I had the greatest urge to move closer to him and kiss him. Instead I thought of Sebastian. my boyfriend of 6 months and how much he loved me. Jessie's lips were so close, but I just couldn't cheat on Sebastian. I quickly shot those ideas out of my head. "I'm sorry, but I have a boyfriend. I'm sorry." I turned away from him, with tears in my eyes. I grabbed my stuff and ran out of the cave, shoving open the bamboo door. Jessie's face was filled with confusion, pain, and this distant haunting look, when I glanced back at him before making a run out. I followed the footprints Jessie had made, carrying me to this cave. I quickly took a picture of the cave, as a memory before I ran off into the woods crying. I kept running, wanting to go back, but couldn't.

I was just steps away from my parents when I was back in Jessie's room. I was looking right into his eyes in confusion. I know I had just left his cave. Jessie took his hand and wiped away my tears that were still pouring. Without a word, he took out a diamond necklace and put it on me. The tingly feeling of his hands set chills up my spine. He sat on his bed, and I just stood there not knowing what to do. If I ran back, would I be mysteriously transported back to Jessie's room like before? My brain filled with questions that I just couldn't ask. There was a blockage in my throat. The air turned cold and rain started to pour down on. I could feel the coldness, and I could hear the drip drop of the rain on the cave's ceiling. My mom was calling me, but I couldn't  and wouldn't answer. My eyes were locked on Jessie, who was staring at the ceiling. I didn't know what to do so I turned around to leave. I took two steps forward and then was on Jessie's bed. I was sitting in front of him and he put his arms around me. He then put his head on my shoulder and his blond hair with purple streaks was in my face. We didn't talk.  We had this mutual connection, that didn't need words to explain it. He leaned back against the wall and I moved with him. For what seemed like hours we sat there in silence our eyes closed and breathing the same air. His warm body against me felt heavenly. I leaned my head against him, taking in the comforting scent of him.

After a while I opened my eyes and I was sitting in the back seat of the car, on my way home. How I got here, I don't know and I wondered if I would ever see Jessie again. I looked out at the raining sky and thought about what had happened with Jessie and I, and my mouth curled into a warm smile. It suddenly occurred to me, I shouldn't have done that. It just wasn't ethical of me. I had and loved Sebastian, but Jessie and I just felt right, like it was almost destiny when I had my body pressed against his. The thought jolted out of me when a bolt of lightning ripped out of the sky and landed right in front of the car. I took a quick breath and felt terrified. Was I going to die? I couldn't die without seeing Jessie again. I just couldn't. I took another breath to stabilize my self. One moment, the rain seemed to be macbre with pierces of lightning and clashes of thunder. And in another moment, it was just drizzles hitting the the car's windshield. It was as if two powerful forces were battling each other. I looked down at my lap and then out my window. I could have sworn I saw jessie standing there. His eyes were deep endless black holes, that I couldn't stop staring at. His body was still and he was looking with such pain. Such agony that i couldn't bear it. I almost yelled stop! But, instead I took hold of myself. I looked at my necklace and then out the windshield. I screamed. A moment ago Jessie was standing there as if he wanted to get hit by our car. Was this my imagination or was he really there? With that thought, I dozed off, tired after what had happened today.

I woke up, suddenly in my bed. My purple sidekick buzzed, meaning I had received a new text. Sebastian had told me to come over to his house. I quickly got dressed and walked over to Sebastian's house. I went up to his room. Sebastian and I were making out on the bed.  and the window of his room open with Jessie sitting at the sill. My eyes trailed off of Sebastian and into Jessie's eyes that filled with blatant pain and loathing staring at the image in front of him. My heart sunk. Jessie left, climbing onto the tree next to Sebastian's window. I looked at Sebastian's face right on top of mines and I thought about the pain that was inflicted into Jessie's eyes only a moment ago. I mentally processed this and pushed Sebastian off of me. "I'm sorry, my mom wants me home," I fibbed. I had to see if Jessie was somewhere near. "I'll text you later," saying something I knew was going to happen anytime soon. I ran out of the house somehow happy. I had caught Sebastian's face that was filled with loathing and perplexity. I dismissed the thought out of my brain, for his pain didn't seem to matter much to me. What mattered  to me right now was that I had to find Jessie.

I searched for Jessie all over town. The thought of me and him together motivated me to keep moving. I walked for what seemed hours. I passed stores, schools, gas stations, and everything else. I had finally found him at the edge of Willow Stream. If you followed that stream down, you would have gotten to Lake Blank. But when I saw Jessie I was stupefied. I wasn't happy that I had found Jessie after so long. There Jessie was, not alone. He was with Rose, my best friend. And now my ex-best friend. They were flirting and holding hands. I felt betrayed, not by Rose, but by Jessie. Had he forgotten what we shared yesterday? I walked to where they could visibly see me. Rose was smiling, and Jessie's eyes were filled with happiness, not the pain it had when he was with me. Jessie's eyes caught mines, and then interlocked with Rose's. He pressed Rose's body closer to him. And then they kissed passionately. They seemed to melt into each other when they kissed. No attention was paid to my presence. It hurt so much just looking at that. I had just lost Sebastian, and now my best friend Rose and Jessie. They had finally pulled away for some breath. They looked as if they were about to make out again. I seized the opportunity of the kissing break, and I slapped Jessie's face. Hard. Jessie stared at me, he looked not hurt, but content and happy. As if he had accomplished something. Was this his revenge for seeing me earlier with Sebastian?

Playlist Song : #3 -Kissin U by Miranda Crosgrove

Friday, June 4, 2010

Chapter 1: The Day That Began It All



Jessie come back. No, don't go into the woods. JESSIE!! I woke up screaming. I kept having the same dream. I didn't know a Jessie and I certainly didn't live by the woods. But the dream kept coming and the same boy appeared in my dreams. I stared at the ceiling in shock. I tried to collect myself, but I was terrified. Who was this Jessie? And what was he doing in my head, my dreams, my life?

I woke up the next morning and my mom was already packed and eating. "Where are we going?"  I asked. "To the lake" she replied nonchalantly. The lake was the most boring place in the world, no joke. I didn't bother to get changed, but instead took my ipod, a handful of cheerios, and got into the car. A half hour later and after listening to the song Airplanes by B.o.B and Hayley Williams 100 times, we had arrived at  Lake Blank. I left my mom and dad to unpack and then left. I walked around the woods with a feeling of being followed. It sent shivers up my spine. I heard the scream of Jessie. I whipped around. This boy stood in front of my eyes. Brooding, just standing there. He then spoke, "Hello". "Who are you?" I said back, making eye contact into his mysterious eyes. "Don't you know me?" The boys eye's pierced mines. I blinked. "I don't think so", I stepped back. Fear overcame me. He spoke again, barely moving his lips. His voice sounded like harmony and chiming bells. "You know me. Think," I took a deep breath. I racked my brain for an answer. And then I froze. It couldn't be. I stared for a moment. Then I said the one name that had been stuck in my head for so long. "Jessie". When I said that name, it was thick with fear, confusion, and relief. The boy nodded. I took a deep breath, and stepped forward. I wanted to tear my eyes off him, but I couldn't. Something about him was too compelling. I wanted to run and leave for, there was thick fear and curiousity layering the air. He put out his hand after I stepped closer, and out of curiosity I took it. His hand was cold. He started to pull me and I followed him, mezmorized. I didn't know what was going on or where we were going. All I knew was that this Jessi character had been in my dreams, and now that I had found him I wouldn't lose him again. I just couldn't let go of him. Ten minutes later, we started to walk deeper into the eerie forest. My mom had texted me, saying lunch was ready and to come back to the lake. Afraid of losing Jessie, and not wanting to leave him, I texted her back saying I'd be there by 2. It was already 11:45. I had only 2 hours and 15 minutes left with Jessie. I then turned to Jessie and spoke for the first time in a while, "That was my mom. I have to get back to the lake by 2." Jessie then stopped and picked me up. Before I knew it he was walking faster, not running but more of jogging. I began to notice how he looked. He was masculine, with blond hair that was streaked with purple. His eye brows had a hint of red in them. But his eyes, they seemed to be empty. They seemed to be as if they were haunted, filled with pain. Even though I was gazing intently into his eyes, I felt scared looking into them.  In about half an hour, we had arrived at a cave in the middle of no where. He called the cave his home. The entrance to the cave was a bamboo door. We walked inside and at the back of the cave there was a young woman cooking. We didn't say anything, she just turned to us and said, "Hello, Jessie. I see you have found Semma. She looks exactly like I imagined her." She gazed at me, as if she was thoroughly observing me like a testing specimen. I suddenly felt self conscious, but my tension eased a bit when the young woman spoke again. "She's beautiful, with that fiery red hair. Those green eyes, they sparkle like emeralds." But the woman didn't mention the fact that I, was just skinny, medium height, and wore a lot of black. I whipped those thoughts out of my mind, and glanced around the cave.

Playlist Song : #2 - Airplanes by B.o.B featuring Hayley Williams